This week we got a big lecture from a film guy named Partrick Kriwanek. What he named it was "Editing 101" which held all the basics we needed to know, to make good cuts between shots and appropriate camera framing. Very informative - as the assignment this week was to plan and create the rough layout for our scene.
Kenny picked the dialogue line I reeeeeally wanted to animate - Freddie and Hess! Pretty excited to be doing it, and Kenny was really amped up by that choice - it's going to be a very subtle thing and a lot of hard work but I am so looking forward to it.
We've all been told to pick a secondary action for our characters to be doing. You can see what I had from the planning below.
I did a whole load of planning.
Filmed a lot of reference.
And also, I created the layout. Which I can't show you right now as I did it on Rich's computer and haven't got the file. It is basically the highlighted images from the middle image above.
Freddie is sorting through his post, which is the secondary action I chose, and Hess is leaving. Freddie hears Hess, says goodbye, but carries on sorting the post almost deliberately ignoring her. She stops, to say goodbye, uncertain. Freddie stops sorting, pauses on a letter to her, and turns to face her. He tells her he'll miss her, but then returns to the post on 'be safe'. Hess is almost taken in by the warmth, but hears Freddie's tone change and resolves into 'be good.'
I've also had my crit. Kenny said that all in all it works, though I have been told that I'm playing Freddie too cold. He should see the post to her, and realise even though she is going, he'll still be getting letters for her for a while. He's going to be seeing her name. He's remembering the first time that her post got sent there, and now, even though she's going, he'll still be getting it. When Hess takes the post from Freddie, we need to see that realisation on her, too. I need to adjust some angles and choose some different lenses, and also completely do a way with the last shot - it's stupid ;) But he liked what I was getting at.
I've since refilmed some reference in a clearer light and taking into consideration more of the subtext behind it. I'm also going to film some reference focussing on my facial performance, as part of week 3's assignment is to take a still from the reference, and recreate that face on Bishop, for each character. I tend to play everything in a sulky fashion, so I'm trying to fix that! Also slightly recomposed my shots. You'll see all next week!